tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3860886212974962920.post4931269830999918090..comments2022-11-07T05:51:25.839-08:00Comments on Ashtis blog: The jackassesAshtihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03335396572564699532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3860886212974962920.post-88955754690315445542011-10-16T07:22:09.454-07:002011-10-16T07:22:09.454-07:00This is an good start Ashti. You have thought abou...This is an good start Ashti. You have thought about character and events here, and you have a start, middle and end.<br /><br />Also, well done for using a flashback. Your film will be all the more interesting for not following a straight chronological order.<br /><br />Your next step is to work out the exact events of your plot. Start to think about breaking your idea into different scenes.<br /><br />Well done.Mr Pylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14120183360447118935noreply@blogger.com